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    Sketch Section Européenne (1)

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    Sketch Section Européenne
    Message de graph-girl posté le 11-12-2008 à 19:43:34 (S | E | F)

    Re-Bonjour à tous!
    Oui, je sais je demande beaucoup de corrections...
    Je fais "Section Européenne" dans mon collège, & j'ai beaucoup de devoirs en plus, sous forme de sketch/résumés/rédactions...
    Pourriez vous une nouvelle fois m'aider à voir mes erreurs ? :O


    Sketch :
    Une jeune fille souhaitant devenir « Au-Pair » a un entretien chez une famille anglaise…



    Pauline ringing the bell.
    - I’m coming!
    - Hello, you are Miss Bredi, aren’t you?
    - No, no, I’m Queen Elizabeth - -‘
    You’re stupid! It’s me, Miss Bredi. Pauline Breeeeedi.
    - I know you’ve got to have a sense of humor… I’m Christie Gertrude Marilyn Kennedy.
    Come in! I had a good impression on the phone.
    - Really? I’m surprising. What do you think about me?
    I’ve a question… John Kennedy was a member of your family?!
    - No… You know, there are a lot of families who have this name…
    Come into the dining-room.
    - Ok…
    - Every girl I had on the phone was C-R-A-Z-Y…
    - Oh! I’m note crazy! I’m 2o, I live in Paris, I’m French…
    - What a beautiful town!
    - Oh yeah. I was born on the 1st of May 1988. Have you got any questions?
    - Yes, a lot. I want to know EVERYTHING. Where do you live exactly? What’s your phone number?
    - I live at 1o; rue de la Paix in Paris. My phone number’s o6.67.58.29.1o. Do you want my email address? It’s ***@****pour votre sécurité, les adresses emails sont interdites sur le site, merci de communiquer par messages privés****
    your level of English?
    - I’m quite good at English.
    - Did you get married? What’s your religion?
    - Oh no, I’m single. I’m catholic.
    - What’s your profession?
    - I did a lot of profession.
    - Can you prepare me you Curriculum Vite?
    - What?
    - Your CV! I’m going to the kitchen to search cakes, I’ll be back.
    Pauline prepares her CV with a lipstick…
    - I’m back!
    - This is my CV.









    - Ok… I’m reading here you were a hairdresser, a graphic designer… for dogs?! A teacher for deaf, a mime artist for blinds…
    - Yeahh, I worked a lot.
    - Are you sure you will be able to keep my children?
    - Yeah! I could keep my dog, but he died 3 days after…
    - Oh, poor dog!
    - Yeah, but that’s the life!
    - What are you parents’ professions? Have you got any brothers or sisters?
    - I don’t know. I ran away when I was 15. I’ve got 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but I don’t know if my parents had more children after my depart.
    - Humm… Why did you leave?
    - My mother didn’t buy my IPhone so I left.
    - Ok…! I’ve more questions for you. Can you swim?
    - No, sorry. I’ve never been to the swimming-pool.
    - Uh! Can you cook?
    - Just spaghettis.
    - Do you smoke? Do you take any drugs? Do you drink alcohol?
    - I smoke every day. I love crack-cocaine! And I drink vodka, whisky, beer and more… Do you drink with me?
    - Oh No! Never! I don’t want my children to drink, to take drugs and to smoke! Sorry, I think you’re not the right person to take care of my children…
    - You’re sure? I’m a very good Nanny!
    - Yes, I’m sure… Thank you very much. Bye!
    - You know, you fail anything!
    - No, no… Bye!!
    After Pauline’s depart, Christie’s demoralise…
    - She’s crazy too… Where can I found the good nanny, the nanny of my dreams?



    Le numéro de téléphone & l'adresse email n'est pas la notre, c'est une inventée ;)




    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de linsey34, postée le 11-12-2008 à 20:25:05 (S | E)
    Dear graph-girl,

    voici les erreurs relevées:

    Pauline ringing the bell.
    - I’m coming!
    - Hello, you are Miss Bredi, aren’t you?
    - No, no, I’m Queen Elizabeth - -‘
    You’re stupid! It’s me, Miss Bredi. Pauline Breeeeedi.
    - I know you’ve got to have a sense of humor… I’m Christie Gertrude Marilyn Kennedy.
    Come in! I had a good impression on the phone.
    - Really? I’m surprising. What do you think about me?
    I’ve a question… John Kennedy was a member of your family?!
    - No… You know, there are a lot of families who have this name…
    Come into the dining-room.
    - Ok…
    - Every girl I had on the phone was C-R-A-Z-Y…
    - Oh! I’m note crazy! I’m 2o, I live in Paris, I’m French…
    - What a beautiful town!
    - Oh yeah. I was born on the 1st of May 1988. Have you got any questions?
    - Yes, a lot. I want to know EVERYTHING. Where do you live exactly? What’s your phone number?
    - I live at 1o; rue de la Paix in Paris. My phone number’s o6.67.58.29.1o. Do you want my email address? It’s ***@****pour votre sécurité, les adresses emails sont interdites sur le site, merci de communiquer par messages privés****
    votre sécurité, les adresses emails sont interdites sur le site, merci de communiquer par messages privés****
    your level of English?
    - I’m quite good at English.
    - Did you get married? What’s your religion?
    - Oh no, I’m single. I’m catholic.
    - What’s your profession?
    - I did a lot of profession.- Can you prepare me you Curriculum Vite?
    - What?
    - Your CV! I’m going to the kitchen to search cakes, I’ll be back.
    Pauline prepares her CV with a lipstick…
    - I’m back!
    - This is my CV.









    - Ok… I’m reading here you were a hairdresser, a graphic designer… for dogs?! A teacher for deaf, a mime artist for blinds
    - Yeahh, I worked a lot.
    - Are you sure you will be able to keep my children?
    - Yeah! I could keep my dog, but he died 3 days after…
    - Oh, poor dog!
    - Yeah, but that’s the life!
    - What are you parents’ professions? Have you got any brothers or sisters?
    - I don’t know. I ran away when I was 15. I’ve got 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but I don’t know if my parents had more children after my depart.
    - Humm… Why did you leave?
    - My mother didn’t buy my IPhone so I left.
    - Ok…! I’ve more questions for you. Can you swim?
    - No, sorry. I’ve never been to the swimming-pool.
    - Uh! Can you cook?
    - Just spaghettis.
    - Do you smoke? Do you take any drugs? Do you drink alcohol?
    - I smoke every day. I love crack-cocaine! And I drink vodka, whisky, beer and more… Do you drink with me?
    - Oh No! Never! I don’t want my children to drink, to take drugs and to smoke! Sorry, I think you’re not the right person to take care of my children…
    - You’re sure? I’m a very good Nanny!
    - Yes, I’m sure… Thank you very much. Bye!
    - You know, you fail anything!
    - No, no… Bye!!
    After Pauline’s depart, Christie’s demoralise
    - She’s crazy too… Where can I found the good nanny, the nanny of my dreams?





    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de graph-girl, postée le 12-12-2008 à 18:10:05 (S | E)
    Pauline ringing the bell.
    - I’m coming!
    - Hello, you are Miss Bredi, aren’t you?
    - No, no, I’m Queen Elizabeth - -‘
    You’re stupid! It’s me, Miss Bredi. Pauline Breeeeedi.
    - I know you’ve got to have a sense of humor… I’m Christie Gertrude Marilyn Kennedy.
    Come in! I had a good impression on the phone.
    - Really? I’m surprise?. What do you think about me?
    I’ve a question… John Kennedy is ? a member of your family?!
    - No… You know, there are a lot of families who have this name…
    Come into the dining-room.
    - Ok…
    - Every girl I had on the phone was C-R-A-Z-Y…
    - Oh! I’m not crazy! I’m 2o, I live in Paris, I’m French…
    - What a beautiful town!
    - Oh yeah. I was born on the 1st of May 1988. Have you got any questions?
    - Yes, a lot. I want to know EVERYTHING. Where do you live exactly? What’s your phone number?
    - I live at 1o; rue de la Paix in Paris. My phone number’s o6.67.58.29.1o. Do you want my email address? It’s AdresseEmailauHasard
    - What's your level of English?
    - I’m quite good at English.
    - Did you get married? What’s your religion?
    - Oh no, I’m single. I’m catholic.
    - What’s your job?
    - I had a lot of job.
    - Can you prepare me you Curriculum Vite?
    - What?
    - Your CV! I’m going to the kitchen to search cakes, I’ll be back.
    Pauline prepares her CV with a lipstick…
    - I’m back!
    - This is my CV.
    - Ok… I’m reading here you were a hairdresser, a graphic designer… for dogs?! A teacher for deaf, a mime artist for blind…
    - Yeahh, I worked a lot.
    - Are you sure you will be able to keep my children?
    - Yeah! I could keep my dog, but he died 3 days after…
    - Oh, poor dog!
    - Yeah, but that’s life!
    - What are you parents’ job? Have you got any brothers or sisters?
    - I don’t know. I ran away when I was 15. I’ve got 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but I don’t know if my parents had more children after my depart.
    - Humm… Why did you leave?
    - My mother didn’t buy a IPhone so I left.
    - Ok…! I’ve more questions for you. Can you swim?
    - No, sorry. I’ve never been to the swimming-pool.
    - Uh! Can you cook?
    - Just spaghettis.
    - Do you smoke? Do you take any drugs? Do you drink alcohol?
    - I smoke every day. I love crack-cocaine! And I drink vodka, whisky, beer and more… Would you drink with me?
    - Oh No! Never! I don’t want my children to drink, to take drugs or to smoke! Sorry, I think you’re not the right person to take care of my children…
    - Are you sure? I’m a very good Nanny!
    - Yes, I’m sure… Thank you very much. Bye!
    - You know, you [Je ne sais pas comment traduire "vous perdez quelque chose"]!
    - No, no… Bye!!
    After Pauline’s departure?, Christie’s demoralise…
    - She’s crazy too… Where can I find the good nanny, the nanny of my dreams?

    -------------------
    Modifié par graph-girl le 12-12-2008 18:10


    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de intrepid34, postée le 13-12-2008 à 08:53:39 (S | E)
    Good morning!

    Lindsey is doing a great job. However, one suggestion that seems to be baffling you both- how about for.......perdre qqchose :
    "Oh well, you can't win 'em all!" or "Win some, lose some!"

    Intrepid


    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de graph-girl, postée le 13-12-2008 à 16:13:39 (S | E)
    Mercii :D

    - I’m coming!
    - Hello, you are Miss Bredi, aren’t you?
    - No, no, I’m Queen Elizabeth - -‘
    You’re stupid! It’s me, Miss Bredi. Pauline Breeeeedi.
    - I know you’ve got to have a sense of humor… I’m Christie Gertrude Marilyn Kennedy.
    Come in! I had a good impression on the phone.
    - Really? I’m surprise?. What do you think about me?
    I’ve a question… John Kennedy is ? a member of your family?!
    - No… You know, there are a lot of families who have this name…
    Come into the dining-room.
    - Ok…
    - Every girl I had on the phone was C-R-A-Z-Y…
    - Oh! I’m not crazy! I’m 2o, I live in Paris, I’m French…
    - What a beautiful town!
    - Oh yeah. I was born on the 1st of May 1988. Have you got any questions?
    - Yes, a lot. I want to know EVERYTHING. Where do you live exactly? What’s your phone number?
    - I live at 1o; rue de la Paix in Paris. My phone number’s o6.67.58.29.1o. Do you want my email address? It’s AdresseEmailauHasard
    - What's your level of English?
    - I’m quite good at English.
    - Did you get married? What’s your religion?
    - Oh no, I’m single. I’m catholic.
    - What’s your job?
    - I had a lot of job.
    - Can you prepare me you Curriculum Vite?
    - What?
    - Your CV! I’m going to the kitchen to search cakes, I’ll be back.
    Pauline prepares her CV with a lipstick…
    - I’m back!
    - This is my CV.
    - Ok… I’m reading here you were a hairdresser, a graphic designer… for dogs?! A teacher for deaf, a mime artist for blind…
    - Yeahh, I worked a lot.
    - Are you sure you will be able to keep my children?
    - Yeah! I could keep my dog, but he died 3 days after…
    - Oh, poor dog!
    - Yeah, but that’s life!
    - What are you parents’ job? Have you got any brothers or sisters?
    - I don’t know. I ran away when I was 15. I’ve got 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but I don’t know if my parents had more children after my depart.
    - Humm… Why did you leave?
    - My mother didn’t buy a IPhone so I left.
    - Ok…! I’ve more questions for you. Can you swim?
    - No, sorry. I’ve never been to the swimming-pool.
    - Uh! Can you cook?
    - Just spaghettis.
    - Do you smoke? Do you take any drugs? Do you drink alcohol?
    - I smoke every day. I love crack-cocaine! And I drink vodka, whisky, beer and more… Would you drink with me?
    - Oh No! Never! I don’t want my children to drink, to take drugs or to smoke! Sorry, I think you’re not the right person to take care of my children…
    - Are you sure? I’m a very good Nanny!
    - Yes, I’m sure… Thank you very much. Bye!
    - You know, Win some, lose some!
    - No, no… Bye!!
    After Pauline’s departure?, Christie’s demoralise…
    - She’s crazy too… Where can I find the good nanny, the nanny of my dreams?


    Normalement c'est bon...Pourriez vous corriger svp?




    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de linsey34, postée le 14-12-2008 à 00:02:04 (S | E)
    Dear graph-girl,

    "je suis surprise" = I'm surprised (participe passé)
    Tu poses une question donc inverse le sujet et le verbe !
    Was Kennedy...?
    - I had a lot of jobs.
    after my depart
    départ = departure or "after I left"
    - My mother didn’t buy a IPhone so I left.
    didn't buy me an I-Phone

    Christie’s demoralise…
    Christie became demoralized


    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de graph-girl, postée le 14-12-2008 à 12:31:51 (S | E)
    - I’m coming!
    - Hello, you are Miss Bredi, aren’t you?
    - No, no, I’m Queen Elizabeth - -‘
    You’re stupid! It’s me, Miss Bredi. Pauline Breeeeedi.
    - I know you’ve got to have a sense of humor… I’m Christie Gertrude Marilyn Kennedy.
    Come in! I had a good impression on the phone.
    - Really? I’m surprised. What do you think about me?
    I’ve a question… Was John Kennedy a member of your family?!
    - No… You know, there are a lot of families who have this name…
    Come into the dining-room.
    - Ok…
    - Every girl I had on the phone was C-R-A-Z-Y…
    - Oh! I’m not crazy! I’m 2o, I live in Paris, I’m French…
    - What a beautiful town!
    - Oh yeah. I was born on the 1st of May 1988. Have you got any questions?
    - Yes, a lot. I want to know EVERYTHING. Where do you live exactly? What’s your phone number?
    - I live at 1o; rue de la Paix in Paris. My phone number’s o6.67.58.29.1o. Do you want my email address? It’s AdresseEmailauHasard
    - What's your level of English?
    - I’m quite good at English.
    - Did you get married? What’s your religion?
    - Oh no, I’m single. I’m catholic.
    - What’s your job?
    - I had a lot of jobs.
    - Can you prepare me you Curriculum Vite?
    - What?
    - Your CV! I’m going to the kitchen to search cakes, I’ll be back.
    Pauline prepares her CV with a lipstick…
    - I’m back!
    - This is my CV.
    - Ok… I’m reading here you were a hairdresser, a graphic designer… for dogs?! A teacher for deaf, a mime artist for blind…
    - Yeahh, I worked a lot.
    - Are you sure you will be able to keep my children?
    - Yeah! I could keep my dog, but he died 3 days after…
    - Oh, poor dog!
    - Yeah, but that’s life!
    - What are you parents’ job? Have you got any brothers or sisters?
    - I don’t know. I ran away when I was 15. I’ve got 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but I don’t know if my parents had more children after I left.
    - Humm… Why did you leave?
    - My mother didn’t buy me an IPhone so I left.
    - Ok…! I’ve more questions for you. Can you swim?
    - No, sorry. I’ve never been to the swimming-pool.
    - Uh! Can you cook?
    - Just spaghettis.
    - Do you smoke? Do you take any drugs? Do you drink alcohol?
    - I smoke every day. I love crack-cocaine! And I drink vodka, whisky, beer and more… Would you drink with me?
    - Oh No! Never! I don’t want my children to drink, to take drugs or to smoke! Sorry, I think you’re not the right person to take care of my children…
    - Are you sure? I’m a very good Nanny!
    - Yes, I’m sure… Thank you very much. Bye!
    - You know, Win some, lose some!
    - No, no… Bye!!
    After Pauline’s departure, Christie became demoralized…
    - She’s crazy too… Where can I find the good nanny, the nanny of my dreams?

    Merci (L)


    Réponse: Sketch Section Européenne de linsey34, postée le 17-12-2008 à 14:15:51 (S | E)
    Hi back !

    just one thing:

    What are you parents’ job?

    What is your parents' job?





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