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Message de lilipomme04 posté le 19-03-2009 à 17:47:21 (S | E | F)
I want to know if my text is correct. Please help me !
Kate asks Wendy, her great grandmother, to talk to her how was life like in her days. Then, wendy and Kate look at Wendy's photo album. Eighty years ago, there was no television nor internet. So, they listened the radio a lot but this on was very big because there weren't still any transistors. At Wendy's home, the radio was in the kitchen. They also went to the pictures very often, once or twice a month. Wendy saw lots and lots of films. But, life wasn't as easy as it is now. When Wendy was ill, her parents didn't always call the doctor and she never went on holiday with his family. At school, teachers were very strict and the pupils weren't allowed to speak in class at all and they had to wear an awful uniform. But Wendy loved going to school. Unfortunatly, she has to leave it when she was fourteen because, at that time, not many people could stay in school after this age. They had to work very youg. So, Wendy went to work in a factorie because she didn't have a choice.
Réponse: Wendy's life in the past de laure95, postée le 19-03-2009 à 18:09:54 (S | E)
Bonsoir, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Kate asks (temps du récit: prétérit simple) Wendy, her great grandmother, to talk to her how was life like (interrogative indirecte: mot interrogatif + sujet + verbe conjugué) in her days (when exactly?). Then, wendy and Kate look (temps) at Wendy's photo album. Eighty years ago, there was no (neither) television nor internet. So, they listened to the radio a lot but this on was very big because there weren't still any transistors. At Wendy's