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    Correction/World of Poker
    Message de govou6948 posté le 30-01-2010 à 00:05:44 (S | E | F)

    Bonjour à tous les amis,
    je dois faire un exposé sur le poker et je ne sais pas si dans le texte que j'ai écrit il y a des fautes ;
    pouvez vous m'aider à les corriger s'il vous plait ?
    Merci d'avance (ce n'est long que par apparence^^)

    World of Poker

    History

    The history is a matter of debate.Poker closely resembles the Persian game of As Nas. It would have been imported in Europe in the time of the crusades, One of the earliest known games in Europe which looked like poker was the 15th century German game Pochspiel. The game of poker, as first played in the United States

    The chip

    The main objectif is to win the chip of the opponent for it the players have to bet chip and the best combinaison of cards win the tour.
    The games stop when one player have all the chips.
    Theycan represente many sort of money. The players decide at the beginning the value of every chips.
    For example a black chips value 1000$ a blue 400 $ a red 200$...

    The player are sitting around a table :
    The first player ( the dealer ) distribute cards when there is not croupier
    The second player is the « small blind » he have to play before the cards has been distribute,
    The third is the « big blind » he have to pay the double of the small blind,
    The other player pay when they have their games.
    In every tour the players give their role to the player who is just in their left

    The objective of the poker is of aligned one of these 9 combinations

    The essential words :

    Bet / Raise: The player want to increase the stake
    Check: the player doesn't want to increse the stake and hit on the table or say « check »
    Fold: The player doesn't have game and And decide of not continue the turn
    Call: The player want to follow his enemy's stake but he doesn't want to raise
    Bluff : The player pretend to have a good game

    Different forms of Poker
    => The Texas hold'em
    => poker dice
    => The poker 5 cards draw

    There is a lot of different forms of poker but this forms are the most original
    The Texas hold’em
    The players receveuse 2 cards and can bet after,there is 3 tour to bet, The first tour 3 cards are puting on the table afet in the other tours there is 1 cards.
    So there are 5 cards on the table and 2 in the hand of every player.
    The Poker Dice

    It tales place with five dices faces of which represent deck of cards: have, king, queen, jack ten and nine. The purpose is to realize combinations as in the poker. The possible combinationsare the ones of the Poker, with some variants due to the nature of dices (for example, there is not "flush")

    The poker 5 card draw
    Its the traditional poker but the most play it's the Texas Hold'em. The player received 5 cards in his hand and if he has a good game he bet. At the end of the tour he can change his cards with 5 fives other cards on the table to improve « his hand ». In this poker there are only 2 tour.

    WPT (World Poker Tour)
    The biggest championship of poker of the world where
    there is the best players,
    Its is diffused at the TV since 2002
    Daniel Negreanu the best player won 5 555 935 $

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 30-01-2010 08:37
    + titre


    Réponse: Correction/World of Poker de saron_d, postée le 30-01-2010 à 15:50:14 (S | E)
    Mais si, c'est assez long!

    Je n'ai corrigé que la première partie où j'ai trouvé bien d'erreurs d'orthographe et de conjugaison des verbes - relisez votre texte (y compris la partie que je n'ai pas faite), en faisant attention surtout aux conjugaisons. Après, repostez-le et je le corrigerai de nouveau.

    saron_d


    World of Poker

    History

    The history is a matter of debate.Poker closely resembles the Persian game of As Nas. It would have been imported in [mouvement, donc "into"] Europe in the time of the crusades [nom propre = majuscule], One of the earliest known games in Europe which looked like poker was the 15th century German game Pochspiel. The game of poker, as first played in the United States ... [phrase inachevée?]

    The chip

    The main objectif is to win the chip of the opponent [meilleur avec "'s"] for it the players have to bet chip [pluriel?] and the best combinaison [mot français]of cards win the tour [mot français].
    The games stop when one player have ["one player" = singulier, donc...] all the chips.
    Theycan [orthographe] represente [orthographe] many sort [1)many + pluriel. 2)vous voulez dire "quantité" plutôt de "sorte"?] of money. The players decide at the beginning the value of every chips ["every" ou "each" + singulier].
    For example a black chips value [le verbe "to value" ne marche pas ici. essayez avec "to be worth"] 1000$ a blue 400 $ a red 200$...

    The player are sitting around a table :
    The first player ( the dealer ) distribute [faute de conjugaison] cards when there is not croupier [article?]
    The second player is the « small blind » [on n'utilise jamais «...» en anglais - on préfère "..." ou '...'] he have [conjugaison] to play before the cards has been distribute [orthographe/conjugaison],
    The third is the « big blind » he have [conjugaison]to pay the double of the small blind,
    The other player pay [conjugaison] when they have their games.
    In every tour [mot français] the players give their role to the player who is just in their left ["immediately to their left"]

    The objective of the poker is of aligned [aucun sens] one of these 9 combinations [lesquels?]

    The essential words :

    Bet / Raise: The player want to increase the stake
    Check: the player doesn't want to increse the stake and hit on the table or say « check »
    Fold: The player doesn't have game [aucun sens] and And decide [conjugaison] of [orthographe?] not continue the turn
    Call: The player want [conjugaison] to follow his enemy's [trop fort! on dirait "opponent"] stake but he doesn't want to raise
    Bluff : The player pretend to have a good game [autre traduction de "jeu" - regardez dans le dictionnaire]


    Réponse: Correction/World of Poker de govou6948, postée le 31-01-2010 à 13:14:28 (S | E)
    Bonjour, pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes sans trop changer le sens des phrases

    Different forms of Poker
    => The Texas hold'em
    => poker dice
    => The poker 5 cards draw

    There is a lot of different forms of poker but this forms are the most original
    The Texas hold’em
    The players receveuse 2 cards and can bet after,there is 3 tour to bet, The first tour 3 cards are puting on the table afet in the other tours there is 1 cards.
    So there are 5 cards on the table and 2 in the hand of every player.
    The Poker Dice

    It tales place with five dices faces of which represent deck of cards: have, king, queen, jack ten and nine. The purpose is to realize combinations as in the poker. The possible combinationsare the ones of the Poker, with some variants due to the nature of dices (for example, there is not "flush")

    The poker 5 card draw
    Its the traditional poker but the most play it's the Texas Hold'em. The player received 5 cards in his hand and if he has a good game he bet. At the end of the tour he can change his cards with 5 fives other cards on the table to improve « his hand ». In this poker there are only 2 tour.

    WPT (World Poker Tour)
    The biggest championship of poker of the world where
    there is the best players,
    Its is diffused at the TV since 2002
    Daniel Negreanu the best player won 5 555 935 $

    -------------------
    Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2010 13:28
    2e partie du texte fusionné ici; il manque un petit merci pour le membre qui vous a aidé pour le début du texte.



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