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    Correction dialogue anglais
    Message de fufu5959 posté le 07-12-2010 à 19:01:49 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour,
    j'ai un petit exposé en anglais à faire avec un collègue.
    Le sujet étant est une négociation entre patron et employé. Pourriez-vous me dire si l'ensemble du texte est correct, merci beaucoup :

    Toc toc toc
    D : Enter

    C : Hello Mister Fufu are how you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came here because I would like do a reviewer with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m pressed

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like do the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want go on the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand you concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customers come tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I let you go.

    C : Ok, after I would like a promotion. I sell a lot of product and do 30% of benefics!

    D : Well, if you want you to raise your statistic of 35% before the 31th, I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like bring my child.

    D : I understand you concern but if you did less schedule, you would have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you would give me one day two week!

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you

    D : it’s normal, I am the boss!!!

    -------------------
    Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2010 19:04



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de gerondif, postée le 07-12-2010 à 19:38:41 (S | E)
    Bonsoir,
    bleu: à corriger. vert:correction offerte
    Toc toc toc (knock)
    D : Enter
    C : Hello Mister Fufu are how you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came here because I would like do a reviewer with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m pressedC :
    First I really need to have two weeks for holidays (maladroit)

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like **** (manque le to de la proposition infinitive: I would like to eat)do the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want *** (idem) go on the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand you concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customers come(à mettre en ing, présent à sens futur) tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I(futur) let you go.

    C : Ok, after(on n'emploie pas after tout seul) I would like a promotion. I sell(prétérit serait mieux) a lot of product(pluriel) and do 30% of benefics!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion, you must raise your statistic(est-ce le bon mot) of 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like ****(manque le to ...)bring up(élever?) my child.

    D : I understand you concern but if you did less schedule, you would have less money!(pourquoi ces temps passés?)

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you would give me one day two week (un jour toutes les deux semaines? à corriger)!

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you

    D : it’s normal, I am the boss!!!




    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de lamy, postée le 07-12-2010 à 20:02:05 (S | E)
    bonsoir
    Ceci: Hello Mister Fufu are how you?, vous pouvez le corriger vous-même.

    Cordialement



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de fufu5959, postée le 07-12-2010 à 20:20:21 (S | E)
    Merci de votre réponse, j'ai corrigé ce que vous m'avez surligné, pourriez vous me dire si tout est bon? Par contre il y a 2 mots en rouge que je ne sais pas du tout corriger. Merci beaucoup
    Knock knock knock

    D : Enter (je ne vois pas quoi dire d’autre)

    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came here because I would like do a interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m speed up

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to do the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want to go in the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I let you going.

    C : Ok, then I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and do 30% of benefit!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion, you must raise your sale of 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you will do less hours, you would have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day two week!

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you

    D : it’s normal, I am the boss!!!



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de headway, postée le 08-12-2010 à 14:01:56 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    'Come in'.
    Si j'ouvre la porte et invite la personne à entrer, je dis: Come on in.
    Cordialement.



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de gerondif, postée le 08-12-2010 à 14:23:20 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    D : Enter (je ne vois pas quoi dire d’autre)
    (on apprend en sixième: "come in" si je suis déjà dans la salle, "go in" si je suis dehors et que les élèves s'éloignent).
    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came(comme le souligne Headway, le présent perfect serait mieux que le prétérit qui implique un souvenir, une action passée, terminée) here because I would like do a interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m speed up

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays (a two weeks' holiday )

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to do(maladroit) the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want to go in the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer is coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I(futur) let you going.

    C : Ok, then I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and do a 30% of benefit!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion, you must raise your sale of by 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you will do less hours, you would(futur) have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day two week!

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you

    D : it’s normal, I am the boss!!!




    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de headway, postée le 08-12-2010 à 14:36:52 (S | E)
    Bonjour à tous,

    J'ai une petite question pour Gérondif. Pourquoi dit-on 'I came' et non 'I've come'?

    Headway.



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de fufu5959, postée le 08-12-2010 à 14:41:27 (S | E)
    Bonjour, merci de votre réponse. Je viens de corriger mes dernières fautes et je pense que tout est bon, pourriez vous y rejeter un oeil? Merci beaucoup

    Toc toc toc
    D : Come in

    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came here because I would like do an interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m in a hurry (pourriez vous me confirmer? Merci)

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to make the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want to go to the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer is coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I will let you going.

    C : Ok, then I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and do a 30% benefits!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion you must raise your sale by 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you do less hours, you will have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day one week!

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you

    D : it’s normal, I am the boss!!!



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de gerondif, postée le 08-12-2010 à 14:49:49 (S | E)
    Bonjour,

    Toc toc toc (onomatopée française)
    D : Come in

    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I came (voir correction précedente grâce à Headway !!) here because I would like do an interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m in a hurry . (ok)

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to make the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want to go to the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer is coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I will let you going.

    C : Ok, then I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and do a 30% benefits!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion you must raise your sale by 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you do less (fewer davant un nom pluriel) hours, you will have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day one week! (i see him once a week, twice a week, three times a week, two days a week)

    D : Just one afternoon!?

    C : Ok but it is very difficult to negociate with you




    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de fufu5959, postée le 08-12-2010 à 15:20:28 (S | E)
    Merci, je pense ne plus avoir de fautes maintenant. Pourriez vous m'en donner le coeur net? merci une nouvelle fois

    Knock knock knock
    D : Come in

    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want?

    C : I’ve come here because I would like do an interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m in a hurry

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to make the road 66 by motorbike

    D : And when do you want to go to the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer is coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I will let you go.

    C : Ok, then I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and do 30% benefits!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion you must raise your sale by 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling. Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you do fewer hours, you will have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day once a week!



    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de gerondif, postée le 08-12-2010 à 16:07:09 (S | E)
    Knock knock knock
    D : Come in

    C : Hello Mister Fufu how are you?

    D : Fine, thank you. Please sit down. What do you want? un peu brutal! What can I do for you ? est la formule consacrée.

    C : I’ve come here because I would like *** do an interview with you.

    D : Yes of course but rapidly because I’m in a hurry.

    C : First I really need to have two weeks for holidays (a two weeks' holiday)

    D : Why ?

    C : Because I would like to make the road 66 by motorbike (pas sûr que ça se dise: I would like to travel across the USA by motorbike along the famous route 66.

    D : And when do you want to go to the Unites States?

    C : Tomorrow!

    D : I understand your concern but It’s not possible now, because a big customer is coming tomorrow, and I need you. If the customer doesn’t come, I will let you go.

    C : Ok, next, I would like a promotion. I sold a lot of products and did 30% benefits!

    D : Well, if you want a promotion you must raise your sales by 35% before the 31th, then I could give you a promotion.

    C : Ok, fine, I would like a new times scheduling (pas sûr que ça se dise). Because I would like to bring up my child.

    D : I understand your concern but if you do fewer hours, you will have less money!

    C : No, I have another proposal.
    If I did 39 hours a week, you could give me one day off a week!




    Réponse: Correction dialogue anglais de fufu5959, postée le 08-12-2010 à 13:59:46 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    je ne sais pas comment dire le mot "entrer" en anglais.
    Par exemple, on frappe à la porte, et l'on dit "entrez". Je pense que l'on doit dire "enter" mais on m'a dit que non.
    Pourriez-vous m'aider?
    Merci

    -------------------
    Modifié par lucile83 le 08-12-2010 17:40
    Topic fusionné car posté à part pour demander confirmation de la correction au sujet d'un mot.
    Vous avez été corrigé et aidé par 2 professeurs d'anglais,que vous faut-il de plus?
    Les membres en question apprécieront!




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