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    Rédaction/adoption

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    Rédaction/adoption
    Message de barbaraz posté le 02-06-2013 à 20:31:05 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour à tous et à toutes

    j'aimerais savoir si ma rédaction est correcte et s'il y a éventuellement des fautes grammaticales?
    Merci pour vos réponses.

    It is estimated that 2% of the french. or about 3 million french, are adoptees. Surveys show that a large majority of these adoptees and birth parents have, at some point, actively searched for biological parents or children separated by adoption. They search for many different reasons, including medical knowledge, the desire to know more about the individual's life, or a major life event, such as the death of an adoptive parent or the birth of a child. The most common reason given, however, is genetic curiosity - a desire to find what a birth parent or child looks like, their talents, and their personality.
    During the school-age a child will probably have questions, fantasies,and feelings about her biological parents.At various times they may test and challenge their adoptive parents about biological parents.
    I think adoptive parents sould help their children t know their biological parents , it is fundamental to their fulfillment and their troughout their live.
    In addition,the search for a biological parents is universal law and the exercice of a law can not be disscused.
    To conclude,I think the child has the right if he expresses the need and when his age and maturity permit, know its history and especially have, to the extent possible, information about his biological mother and father,
    his brothers and sisters. He is entitled to his cultural and ethnic identity.
    It is therefore essential that parents encourage children in this demarche. The search for origins should receive psychosocial support and should investment parents to supervise these approaches I think is fundamental; we all want to know where we came from,and what our roots are. Being a mother by adoptive is hard and surch a blessing at the same time.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 02-06-2013 21:39



    Réponse: Rédaction/adoption de hushpuppy, postée le 03-06-2013 à 03:27:17 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    C'est très bien, il y a des conseils en violet et des corrections en bleu :

    It is estimated that 2% of the French population, about 3 million people, are adopted. Surveys show that a large majority of these adoptees and birth parents have, at some point, actively searched for (possessif) biological parents or children, respectively. separated by adoption. They search for many different reasons, including medical knowledge, the desire to know more about the individual's life, or a major life event, such as the death of an adoptive parent or the birth of a child. The most common reason given, however, is genetic curiosity - a desire to find what a birth parent or child looks like, their talents, and their personality.
    During their adolescent years, a child will probably have questions, fantasies,and feelings about their biological parents.At various times they may test and challenge their adoptive parents about (possessif) biological parents.
    I think adoptive parents sould(orthographe) help their children with questions about their biological parents , it is fundamental to their fulfillment and their troughout(orthographe) their live(pluriel).
    In addition,the search for a biological parents is (article indéfini) universal right and the exercice(orthographe) of such rights can not be debated.
    To conclude,I think the child has the right, if he expresses the need and when his age and maturity permit, to know its(il est une personne, donc..) history and especially to have, to the extent possible, information about his biological mother and father, his brothers and sisters. He is entitled to his cultural and ethnic identity.
    It is therefore essential that parents encourage children in this process. The search for origins should receive psychosocial support and parents should investment  to supervise these approaches. I think (démonstratif) is fundamental; we all want to know where we came from,and what our roots are. Being a mother through adoption is hard (nom manque) and surch(orthographe) a blessing at the same time.




    Réponse: Rédaction/adoption de barbaraz, postée le 03-06-2013 à 09:05:35 (S | E)
    Bonjour Madame,
    merci beaucoup pour votre aide qui m'est precieuse. Je voudrais savoir la bonne orthographe de exercice et surch ainsi que trougouht?
    Merci par avance

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2013 11:28



    Réponse: Rédaction/adoption de sherry48, postée le 03-06-2013 à 11:02:28 (S | E)
    Hello.

    Since "surch" is part of a phrase, you can look it up in the dictionary by looking up the other word in the phrase:
    Lien internet

    As for the other word, you will find the spelling easily in the French-English dictionary.
    Sherry



    Réponse: Rédaction/adoption de barbaraz, postée le 03-06-2013 à 12:20:00 (S | E)
    Hello,
    thank you very much for your help good day to you.



    Réponse: Rédaction/adoption de violet91, postée le 03-06-2013 à 18:15:02 (S | E)
    Hello ,
    C'est vrai que cet ' essay' est très bien construit et argumenté . Hushpuppy , une aide précieuse et infatigable . Une petite chose peut- être à ajouter : le pronom ' it ' après ' when his age and maturity permit it ( ou : him to do so )ou alors , supprimer cette virgule.
    Juste une suggestion ?

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2013 21:02
    Mise en forme




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