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Message de rominai25 posté le 08-02-2014 à 15:43:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des exercices pour s’entraîner à écrire un journal intime (une journée) ?
Et aussi puis-je vous demander votre avis concernant ce texte ci-dessous?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear diary,
Sorry I break my resolutions just for a moment, because my night has been animate ! At 9.am, I was watching television, I was drinking, smoking a little and eating popcorn at the same time. I was watching a romantic movie who named "Mr and Mme Smith". Then I remembered this card. What is there inside ? Who write it ? What is it said ? Many questions without answers. It's carzy ? That scheming to me ! Why didn't trying to open her, just to glance, nobody will know it. I'm nervous. "okok stop Bridget' Jones, it's just a card and you 've never seen her" I said. It was ridiculous. I was eating for drowned my desire to know. But nothing has changed. I finally found sleep around midnight. In the morning I took breakfast, a glass with orange juice and two pieces of bread with butter...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-02-2014 18:29
Message de rominai25 posté le 08-02-2014 à 15:43:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des exercices pour s’entraîner à écrire un journal intime (une journée) ?
Et aussi puis-je vous demander votre avis concernant ce texte ci-dessous?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear diary,
Sorry I break my resolutions just for a moment, because my night has been animate ! At 9.am, I was watching television, I was drinking, smoking a little and eating popcorn at the same time. I was watching a romantic movie who named "Mr and Mme Smith". Then I remembered this card. What is there inside ? Who write it ? What is it said ? Many questions without answers. It's carzy ? That scheming to me ! Why didn't trying to open her, just to glance, nobody will know it. I'm nervous. "okok stop Bridget' Jones, it's just a card and you 've never seen her" I said. It was ridiculous. I was eating for drowned my desire to know. But nothing has changed. I finally found sleep around midnight. In the morning I took breakfast, a glass with orange juice and two pieces of bread with butter...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-02-2014 18:29
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