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Message de ninanou posté le 07-12-2014 à 18:22:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais et j'aurais aimé que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes que j'ai faites; merci d'avance.
"Young people from inner take great initiative"
It's true that we often hear young people from inner. Usually, for cases of theft, for business of narcotic, bad way of speaking and other made negative. Meaning that, when they make positive actions, they are not recognized and complimented.
The youth who come from the ghetto of xxx show generosity bringing coffee, coverage and cheking the health condition.
Anonymously and without asking anything in return, this grup of friends were able to point out other than through violence.
Much more than an act of generosity, it prouves that youth outcome of guettos is able to do good.
It's true that in a city, these people are somhow exclused from the civic life, are stigmatized and denigrated. No activities are proposed, therefore young people are often without prospects.
The help they give to these homeless people gives them objective and responsibilities. Essential qualities to become an adult and able to take the own decision.
Yet the press, or other communication facilities include Television service ... only describe the youth as delinquent. Why cities, means of communication, do not pass this positive image? Why do not they put forward what has been done these teenagers?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2014 18:55
Message de ninanou posté le 07-12-2014 à 18:22:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais et j'aurais aimé que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes que j'ai faites; merci d'avance.
"Young people from inner take great initiative"
It's true that we often hear young people from inner. Usually, for cases of theft, for business of narcotic, bad way of speaking and other made negative. Meaning that, when they make positive actions, they are not recognized and complimented.
The youth who come from the ghetto of xxx show generosity bringing coffee, coverage and cheking the health condition.
Anonymously and without asking anything in return, this grup of friends were able to point out other than through violence.
Much more than an act of generosity, it prouves that youth outcome of guettos is able to do good.
It's true that in a city, these people are somhow exclused from the civic life, are stigmatized and denigrated. No activities are proposed, therefore young people are often without prospects.
The help they give to these homeless people gives them objective and responsibilities. Essential qualities to become an adult and able to take the own decision.
Yet the press, or other communication facilities include Television service ... only describe the youth as delinquent. Why cities, means of communication, do not pass this positive image? Why do not they put forward what has been done these teenagers?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2014 18:55
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