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    Devoir/Meeting a singer

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    Devoir/Meeting a singer
    Message de uzrok posté le 06-05-2015 à 22:05:50 (S | E | F)
    Bonsoir,

    Je tiens d'abord à remercier ceux qui m'ont aidé l'autre fois pour me préparer à mon oral.
    J'ai un texte en anglais à rendre demain.
    Je doute de mon orthographe et de ma grammaire, aussi, pourriez-vous m'aider en m'indiquant si mon texte contient des fautes ?
    Je vous remercie d'avance.

    It's amazing !! I met Eddy Malou, The singer ! I was in New York, I was watching a street show when a man rushed towards me. He said: Hide me of Paparazzi. So I took him in my home.
    He Was fleered the Paparazzi. He just wanted to walk.
    He thanked me, I was so surprised, I was shocked!
    So I asked him to agree to ask him some questions.
    First, What do you feel is you biggest achievement? Well, I'm particulary prouf of my career, and the work that I have provided.
    Tell me a little bit about your childhood. Sure, I was a very shy and reserves shild, What interested me was politics. it's weird for a kid, right? (laught from Eddy Malou)
    What are you passionate about ? I am passionate about politics. And I love my son.
    Who inspires you ?
    My neighbor, she inspires me, since childhood, she struggles to get ahead in life because she is handicapped but does not give up, and struggle every day to regain a normal life. She is so determined, she inspires me.
    What is your favourite movie ?
    I don't really have a favorite movie, but my favorite series is "What the Cut 36" with Antoine Daniel and "Samuel the ventilator."
    What do you think of paparazzi ?
    oh, no, please, don't talk to me about them, I hate them. next question !
    Me : Ok ( laught )
    What's the next step in your career ?
    Mhh ... My next step in my career is to get rid OF PAPARAZZI !!
    Me : Please, be a little serious, this is an interview Mr. Eddy Malou!
    Eddy Malou : Yes sorry. My next step in my career is to increase my popularity.
    Me : God thank you! We finally have a serious answer!
    Eddy Malou : What do you said ?
    Me : No, that's not important!
    What do you do if you lose your fan ?
    I would be confused, I do not know what to do without them!
    What do you think of flying ventilators?
    Hmm... I think that... Wait, Flying ventilators do not exist, and it has no relation to our interview!
    Me : Sorry...
    Eddy Malou : Can I ask you just a question ?
    Me : Yes ?
    Eddy Malou : Can I go ?
    Me : Yes, thanks for your time. It was a pleasure to talk to you.
    Eddy malou : Wait, I have something to tell you, it's a Prank !! Smile, you're on TV !!
    me : You'd tell me about !!

    Conclusion :
    Eddy Malou is really funny, I didn't know that was a prank. And he invited me to his next concert. He was very friendly and funny. My opinion changed about him, he's a very friendly singer.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 06-05-2015 22:15


    Réponse: Devoir/Meeting a singer de gerondif, postée le 06-05-2015 à 22:15:08 (S | E)
    Bonsoir,
    vous auriez pu mieux séparer questions réponses.
    erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
    It's amazing !! I met Eddy Malou, The singer ! I was in New York, I was watching a street show when a man rushed towards me. He said: Hide me of Paparazzi. So I took him in my home.

    He Was fleered the Paparazzi. He just wanted to walk.
    He thanked me, I was so surprised, I was shocked!

    So I asked him to agree to ask him some questions.

    First, What do you feel is your biggest achievement? Well, I'm particulary prouf of my career, and the work that I have provided.

    Tell me a little bit about your childhood. Sure, I was a very shy and reserves shild, What interested me was politics. it's weird for a kid, right? (laught from Eddy Malou)

    What are you passionate about ? I am passionate about politics. And I love my son.

    Who inspires you ?

    My neighbor, she inspires me. since childhood, she struggles(present perfect avec since) to get ahead in life because she is handicapped but does not give up, and struggle every day to regain a normal life. She is so determined, she inspires me.

    What is your favourite movie ?

    I don't really have a favorite movie, but my favorite series is "What the Cut 36" with Antoine Daniel and "Samuel the ventilator."

    What do you think of paparazzi ?

    oh, no, please, don't talk to me about them, I hate them. next question !

    Me : Ok ( laught )

    What's the next step in your career ?

    Mhh ... My next step in my career is to get rid OF PAPARAZZI !!

    Me : Please, be a little serious, this is an interview Mr. Eddy Malou!

    Eddy Malou : Yes sorry. My next step in my career is to increase my popularity.

    Me : God thank you! We finally have a serious answer!

    Eddy Malou : What do you said ?

    Me : No, that's not important!

    What do(temps) you do if you lose your fans ?

    I would be confused, I do not know what to do without them!

    What do you think of flying ventilators?

    Hmm... I think that... Wait, Flying ventilators do not exist, and it has no relation to our interview!

    Me : Sorry...

    Eddy Malou : Can I ask you just a question ?

    Me : Yes ?

    Eddy Malou : Can I go ?

    Me : Yes, thanks for your time. It was a pleasure to talk to you.

    Eddy malou : Wait, I have something to tell you, it's a Prank !! Smile, you're on TV !!

    me : You'd tell me about !!

    Conclusion :

    Eddy Malou is really funny, I didn't know that was a prank. And he invited me to his next concert. He was very friendly and funny. My opinion changed about him, he's a very friendly singer.



    Réponse: Devoir/Meeting a singer de uzrok, postée le 06-05-2015 à 22:30:44 (S | E)
    Bonjour, Merci pour votre réponse rapide
    J'ai juste quelques questions.
    Comment puis-je corriger la phrase
    " He Was fleered the Paparazzi. "
    Vous m'aviez indiqué que Fleered est une faute, mais je ne sais pas comment la corriger .

    Ainsi que
    " since childhood, she struggles "
    Merci d'avance,
    Cordialement,



    Réponse: Devoir/Meeting a singer de gerondif, postée le 06-05-2015 à 22:41:07 (S | E)
    Hello,
    ah, le bon vieux "je ne sais pas"!
    to flee I fled fled est le verbe fuir, to fleer, je ne le connais pas.
    il était en train de fuir = forme en ing.
    Dans une phrase avec for ou since au sens de depuis, il faut que le verbe soit au present perfect.
    I am writing.
    I have been writing for 6 minutes, since twenty-five to eleven.



    Réponse: Devoir/Meeting a singer de uzrok, postée le 06-05-2015 à 22:55:57 (S | E)
    Bonsoir,
    Si j'ai bien compris, je dois écrire
    " He was Fling " ?
    Cordialement,



    Réponse: Devoir/Meeting a singer de gerondif, postée le 06-05-2015 à 23:00:08 (S | E)
    to see ne donne pas I am sing!
    d'ailleurs, s'enfuir, c'est plutôt "to run away from" flee, c'est bon pour les textes bibliques ou historiques.





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