Accueil du site pour apprendre le français Créer un test / 1 leçon par semaine
Connectez-vous !

Cliquez ici pour vous connecter
Nouveau compte
4 millions de comptes créés

100% gratuit !
[Avantages]

  • Accueil
  • Accès rapides
  • Imprimer
  • Livre d'or
  • Plan du site
  • Recommander
  • Signaler un bug
  • Faire un lien

  • Comme des milliers de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine une leçon de français !





    > Publicités :




    > Recommandés:
    -Jeux gratuits
    -Nos autres sites
       



    Oral/Spaces and Exchanges

    Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas

    [POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]


    Oral/Spaces and Exchanges
    Message de charlene29 posté le 10-04-2016 à 18:19:54 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour,
    je passe mon oral d'anglais dans un mois, et dans la mesure du possible je souhaiterais que l'on puisse me corriger svp s'il vous plait.
    Merci pour vos réponses.


    Let’s talk about spaces and exchanges. This notion includes two elements: first spaces which can be territories like countries and geographical or virtual areas like internet and after exchanges which can be relationships, interactions or links. We can identify economic exchanges; cultural exchanges; political exchanges. In our modern world, distances between spaces and exchanges are reduced thanks to new means of communication and of transports spaces are closer. Exchanges are easier and faster than before.
    In class, we studied this notion with the chapter cultural identities, who is what by what we recognize a human community.
    What is the role of cultural identities for exchanges between countries?
    To begin, we’re going to see cultural identities in the political field.
    Then, let’s study tourist and cultural exchanges.
    Finally, we will focus on immigration.
    In first, we watched a video extract of a British movie whose title is Love actually. The scene takes place in England, during a press conference between the president of the USA and the British Prime Minister, in front of journalists and photographs. The president speaks in first, he talks about “special relationship”, indeed he implies points common of USA and UK. In spite of these exchanges between us, the atmosphere between the two politicians is tense, that is why the president said “special relationship”. Consequently, the British prime minister delivers a speech in order to defend his small country, he mentions elements which make English people proud such as the Beatles or Winston Churchill who was his predecessor during the world war two. In his speech, the British prime minister doesn’t really highlight the notion “spaces and exchanges”, because he doesn’t talk about exchanges between the two countries or about political agreement. Instead he focuses on British cultural identity to show Britain is as powerful as the USA.
    In a second time, we analysed cultural identities in tourism and to do that we studied a travel guide written for American tourists who want to visit France. This guide is entitled “U.S Travel Advisory” and he is divided in different parts which represent the cultural identity of France. This travel guide deals with a list of criticism prejudices against French people, with a humorous tone. The author is unknown but he blames French people for doing many things. Indeed, the author criticizes us for eating loathsome things such as snails, and he reproaches us for having a bad tempered too. But then we realize that the real target of the text is American tourists who travel in France. Actually, they lack curiosity, they don’t want wish discover French’s food and the author criticizes them for eating junk food. American travellers are silly, they don’t want to meet the local inhabitants and to adapt to a foreign culture. They prefer stay in group, speak English, they are narrow minded and self-centred which doesn’t facilitate exchanges. Unfortunately, in our modern world the tourist exchanges between diverse countries take place more and more in this way.
    Finally, we have seen another document about cultural exchanges in the context of immigration. It intituled “Don’t judge me” and extracted of Deception on his Mind, written by Elisabeth Georges. The scene takes place in Great Britain, the present characters are Sahlah and Rachel two English teenagers, who have been friends for eleven years. Sahlah is immigrant, she has Pakistani origins and she had to adapt to the English way of life. The two girls fought each other for two weeks ago this extract because they are disagreeing about a Pakistani custom. It comes to the arranged marriage, Sahlah much get married with a Pakistani stranger chosen by her parents and Rachel tried to dissuade her. The case of Sahlah prove that immigrants have to adapt to a new cultural identity but they also have their own customs.

    To conclude, we can say that the different cultural identities include all the customs appropriate to an ethnic group and the diversity of the traditions allows exchanges.
    From my point of view, exchanges are necessary for the proper functioning of the society.
    Are the cultural exchanges the most important?

    -------------------
    Modifié par lucile83 le 10-04-2016 20:54


    Réponse: Oral/Spaces and Exchanges de here4u, postée le 10-04-2016 à 22:58:08 (S | E)
    Hello !

    Well! I'll start and try to do it in one go... not sure...

    Let’s talk about spaces and exchanges. This notion includes two elements: first, spaces which can be territories like countries and geographical or virtual areas like XXX internet and after exchanges which can be relationships, interactions or links. We can identify economic exchanges; cultural exchanges; political exchanges. In our modern world, distances between spaces and exchanges are reduced thanks to new means of communication and of transports; spaces are closer. Exchanges are easier and faster than before.
    In class, we studied this notion with the chapter about ? cultural identities, who is what by what we recognize a human community.
    What is the role of cultural identities for exchanges between countries?
    To begin, we’re going to see cultural identities in the political field.
    Then, let’s study tourist and cultural exchanges.
    Finally, we will focus on immigration.
    In first, we watched a video extract of a British movie whose title is Love actually. The scene takes place in England, during a press conference between the president of the USA and the British Prime Minister, in front of journalists and photographs. The president speaks in first, he talks about “special relationship”(il faut soit un article, soit un pluriel!, indeed he implies points commonordre des mots) ofXXX USA and XXX UK. In spite of these exchanges between us , the atmosphere between the two politicians is tense, that is why the president said A“special relationship”. Consequently, the British prime minister delivers a speech in order to defend his "small country", he mentions elements which make English people proud such as the Beatles or Winston Churchill who was his predecessor during the world war two. In his speech, the British prime minister doesn’t really highlight the notion OF “spaces and exchanges”, because he doesn’t talk about exchanges between the two countries or about political agreement(article ou pluriel!). Instead he focuses on British cultural identity to show Britain is as powerful as the USA.
    In a second time, we analysed cultural identities in tourism and to do that, we studied a travel guide written for American tourists who want to visit France. This guide is entitled “U.S Travel Advisory” and he is divided inTO different parts which represent the cultural identity of France. This travel guide deals with a list of criticism prejudices against French people, with a humorous tone. The author is unknown but he blames French people for doing many things. Indeed, the author criticizes us for eating loathsome things such as snails, and he reproaches us for having a bad tempered too. But then we realize that the real target of the text is American tourists who travel in France. Actually, they lack curiosity, they don’t want wish XX discover French’s food and the author criticizes them for eating junk food. American travellers are silly, they don’t want to meet the local inhabitants and to adapt to a foreign culture. They prefer stay in group, speak English, they are narrow minded and self-centred which doesn’t facilitate exchanges. Unfortunately, in our modern world the tourist exchanges between diverse countries take place more and more in this way.
    Finally, we have seen another document about cultural exchanges in the context of immigration. It intituled “Don’t judge me” and extracted of Deception on his Mind, written by Elisabeth Georges. The scene takes place in Great Britain, the present characters are Sahlah and Rachel two English teenagers, who have been friends for eleven years. Sahlah isXX immigrant, she has Pakistani origins and she had to adapt to the English way of life. The two girls fought each other for two weeks ago about ? this extract because they are disagreeing (forme et temps!)about a Pakistani custom. It comes to the arranged marriageS, Sahlah much get married with a Pakistani stranger chosen by her parents and Rachel tried to dissuade her. The case of Sahlah prove that immigrants have to adapt to a new cultural identity but they also have their own customs.

    To conclude, we can say that the different cultural identities include all the customs appropriate to an ethnic group and the diversity of the traditions allows exchanges.
    From my point of view, exchanges are necessary for the proper functioning of the society.
    Are the cultural exchanges the most important XXXX?

    blue= wrong ; green= suggestions; underlined= very clumsy ; XXX= missing elements.



    Réponse: Oral/Spaces and Exchanges de charlene29, postée le 11-04-2016 à 15:56:34 (S | E)
    merci here4u pour votre aide, j'ai essayer de corriger le plus de fautes possibles :

    Let’s talk about spaces and exchanges. This notion includes two elements: first spaces which can be territories like countries and geographical or virtual areas like the internet and then exchanges which can be relationships, interactions or links. We can identify economic exchanges; cultural exchanges; political exchanges. In our modern world, distances between spaces and exchanges are reduced thanks to new means of communication and of transports spaces are closer. Exchanges are easier and faster than before.
    In class, we studied this notion with the chapter about cultural identities.
    What is the role of cultural identities for exchanges between countries?
    To begin, we’re going to see cultural identities in the political field.
    Then, let’s study tourism and cultural exchanges.
    Finally, we will focus on immigration.
    First, we watched a video extract of a British movie whose title is Love actually. The scene takes place in England, during a press conference between the president of the USA and the British Prime Minister, in front of journalists and photographs. The president speaks first, he talks about “specials relationships”, indeed he implies common points of the USA and the UK. In spite of these exchanges between them, the atmosphere between the two politicians is tense, that is why the president said “specials relationships”. Consequently, the British prime minister delivers a speech in order to defend his small country, he mentions components which make English people proud such as the Beatles or Winston Churchill who was his predecessor during world war two. In his speech, the British prime minister doesn’t really highlight the notion of “spaces and exchanges”, because he doesn’t talk about exchanges between the two countries or about a political agreement. Instead he focuses on British cultural identity to show Britain is as powerful as the USA.
    In a second time, we analysed cultural identities in tourism and to do that we studied a travel guide written for American tourists who want to visit France. This guide is entitled “U.S Travel Advisory” and it is divided into different parts which represent the cultural identity of France. This travel guide deals with a list of criticism prejudices against French people, in a humorous tone. The author is unknown but he blames French people for doing many things. Indeed, the author criticizes them for eating loathsome things such as snails, and he reproaches them for have a bad tempered too. But then we realize that the real target of the text is American tourists who travel in France. Actually, they lack curiosity, they don’t want wish to discover French food and the author criticizes them for eating junk food. American travellers are silly, they don’t want to meet the local inhabitants and to adapt to a foreign culture. They prefer be in group, talk English, they are narrow minded and self-centred which doesn’t facilitate exchanges.
    Finally, we have seen another document about cultural exchanges in the context of immigration. It entitled “Don’t judge me” and written by Elisabeth Georges. The scene takes place in Great Britain, the present characters are Sahlah and Rachel two English teenagers, who have been friends for eleven years. Sahlah is an immigrant, she has Pakistani origins and she had to adapt to the English way of life. The two girls fought each other for two weeks ago this extract because they disagree about a Pakistani custom. It comes to arranged marriage, Sahlah has to get married to a Pakistani stranger chosen by her parents and Rachel tried to dissuade her. Sahlah’s story prove that immigrants have to adapt to a new cultural identity but they also have their own customs.

    To conclude, we can say that the different cultural identities include all the customs appropriate to an ethnic group and the diversity of the traditions allows exchanges.
    From my point of view, exchanges are necessary for the proper functioning of the society.
    To widen, we can wonder, how evolved the trade with the globalization?




    [POSTER UNE NOUVELLE REPONSE] [Suivre ce sujet]


    Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais










    Partager : Facebook / Twitter / ... 


    > INDISPENSABLES : TESTEZ VOTRE NIVEAU | GUIDE DE TRAVAIL | NOS MEILLEURES FICHES | Les fiches les plus populaires | Une leçon par email par semaine | Aide/Contact

    > COURS ET EXERCICES : Abréviations | Accords | Adjectifs | Adverbes | Alphabet | Animaux | Argent | Argot | Articles | Audio | Auxiliaires | Chanson | Communication | Comparatifs/Superlatifs | Composés | Conditionnel | Confusions | Conjonctions | Connecteurs | Contes | Contraires | Corps | Couleurs | Courrier | Cours | Dates | Dialogues | Dictées | Décrire | Démonstratifs | Ecole | Etre | Exclamations | Famille | Faux amis | Français Langue Etrangère / Langue Seconde |Films | Formation | Futur | Fêtes | Genre | Goûts | Grammaire | Grands débutants | Guide | Géographie | Heure | Homonymes | Impersonnel | Infinitif | Internet | Inversion | Jeux | Journaux | Lettre manquante | Littérature | Magasin | Maison | Majuscules | Maladies | Mots | Mouvement | Musique | Mélanges | Méthodologie | Métiers | Météo | Nature | Nombres | Noms | Nourriture | Négations | Opinion | Ordres | Orthographe | Participes | Particules | Passif | Passé | Pays | Pluriel | Politesse | Ponctuation | Possession | Poèmes | Pronominaux | Pronoms | Prononciation | Proverbes | Prépositions | Présent | Présenter | Quantité | Question | Relatives | Sports | Style direct | Subjonctif | Subordonnées | Synonymes | Temps | Tests de niveau | Tous/Tout | Traductions | Travail | Téléphone | Vidéo | Vie quotidienne | Villes | Voitures | Voyages | Vêtements

    > NOS AUTRES SITES GRATUITS : Cours mathématiques | Cours d'espagnol | Cours d'allemand | Cours de français | Cours de maths | Outils utiles | Bac d'anglais | Learn French | Learn English | Créez des exercices

    > INFORMATIONS : Copyright - En savoir plus, Aide, Contactez-nous [Conditions d'utilisation] [Conseils de sécurité] [Plan du site] Reproductions et traductions interdites sur tout support (voir conditions) | Contenu des sites déposé chaque semaine chez un huissier de justice | Mentions légales / Vie privée / Cookies.
    | Cours et exercices de français 100% gratuits, hors abonnement internet auprès d'un fournisseur d'accès.