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    Vérifier/Vikings

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    Message de heavydirtycat posté le 23-02-2017 à 12:55:13 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour tout le monde !
    J'ai fait un texte sur les Vikings, en anglais.
    Je l'ai relu plusieurs fois, mais j'aimerais bien si possible une correction (s'il y a des fautes) et m'expliquer mes erreurs.

    Vikings are Nordic explorers who lived from late 8th century to mid-11th century, during the period called “Viking Age”. They are known for their act of piracy and of looting and for their barbarism and violence of their raids too. They are describe for be cruel, to burn villages and to kill in large number. Vikings discovered a lot of territories, as America or Orient, and controlled a lot of areas through force. Vikings were very good seafarers too and crossed oceans and seas, but also capable to sailed in rivers and small streams. Their boats are called langskip and not drakkars, who are actually the dragon at the front of the boat.
    Among other, Vikings did their first raid in 795 on the Irish’s territory, and did a lot of attacks along the coasts. Over time, Vikings’ offensives became more important and so they began to build towns: Therefore, Dublin built in 917. However, the king of Ireland Brian Boru fought Vikings’ invasion with aid of the king Mael Sechnaill and destroyed Dublin. The Viking age is considered to have ended with the establishment of Christianity as the dominant religion. So, Irish fought Vikings during almost 300 years.

    Merci beaucoup !

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 23-02-2017 12:58


    Réponse : Vérifier/Vikings de here4u, postée le 23-02-2017 à 23:57:26 (S | E)
    hello !

    XXX Vikings are Nordic explorers who lived from late 8th century to mid-11th century, during the period called “XXX Viking Age”. They are known for their act of piracy and of looting and for their barbarism and violence of their raids too. They are describe (past participle is necessary here!)for be cruel, to burn villages and to kill in large number. XXX XXX Vikings discovered a lot of territories, as America or Orient, and controlled a lot of areas through force. XXX Vikings were very good seafarers too and crossed oceans and seas, but also capable to sailed in rivers and small streams. Their boats are called langskip(spelling?) and not drakkars, who are actually the dragon at the front of the boat.
    Among other, XXX Vikings did their first raid in 795 on the Irish’s territory, and did a lot of attacks along the coasts. Over time, XXX Vikings’ offensives became more important and so they began to build towns: Therefore,= such as Dublin built in 917. However, the king of Ireland Brian Boru fought XXX Vikings’ invasion with XXX aid of the king Mael Sechnaill and destroyed Dublin. The Viking age is considered to have ended with the establishment of Christianity as the dominant religion. So, XXX Irish fought XXX Vikings during(for) almost 300 years.



    Réponse : Vérifier/Vikings de heavydirtycat, postée le 24-02-2017 à 13:20:34 (S | E)
    Déjà merci beaucoup de ta réponse
    J'essaie de corriger :
    The Vikings are Nordic explorers who lived from late 8th century to mid-11th century, during the period called “The Viking Age”. They are known for their act of piracy and of looting and for theim barbarism and violence of their raids too. They are described to be cruel, burn villages and kill in large number. The Vikings discovered a lot of territories, like America or Orient, and controlled a lot of areas through force. The Vikings were very good seafarers too and crossed oceans and seas, but also they have an ability to navigate in rivers and small streams. Their boats are called "longship" and not drakkars, which are actually the dragon at the front of the boat.
    Among others, the Vikings did their first raid in 795 on the Irishs territory, and did a lot of attacks along the coasts. Over time, the Vikings’ offensives became more important and so they began to build towns: such as Dublin built in 917. However, the king of Ireland Brian Boru fought the Vikings’ invasion with the aid of king Mael Sechnaill and destroyed Dublin. The Viking age is considered to have ended with the establishment of Christianity as the dominant religion. So, the Irish fought the Vikings for almost 300 years.



    Réponse : Vérifier/Vikings de laure95, postée le 24-02-2017 à 15:06:36 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
    - for theim (ça n'existe pas, mettre un article)barbarism and violence of their raids too.
    -They are described to be cruel, burn villages and kill in large number: they are described for + verbe + ing.
    - but also (alos n'est pas à la bonne place)they have (passé)an ability to navigate in (on pas in, sail va aussi)rivers
    -Their boats are called "longship" and not drakkars, which are (mettre le verbe avoir)actually the dragon at the front of the boat.
    - on the Irishs (pas de "s")territory,



    Réponse : Vérifier/Vikings de heavydirtycat, postée le 24-02-2017 à 16:31:47 (S | E)
    Ok, je ressaie encore une fois :
    The Vikings are Nordic explorers who lived from late 8th century to mid-11th century, during the period called “The Viking Age”. They are known for their act of piracy and of looting and for the barbarism and violence of their raids too. They are described for being cruel, burning villages and killing in large number. The Vikings discovered a lot of territories, like America or Orient, and controlled a lot of areas through force. The Vikings were very good seafarers too and crossed oceans and seas, but they had an ability to navigate rivers and small streams too. Their boats are called "longship" and not drakkars, which (pourquoi "avoir" ? Ce n'est pas "qui est en réalité ?") actually the dragon at the front of the boat.
    Among others, the Vikings did their first raid in 795 on the Irish territory, and did a lot of attacks along the coasts. Over time, the Vikings’ offensives became more important and so they began to build towns: such as Dublin built in 917. However, the king of Ireland Brian Boru fought the Vikings’ invasion with the aid of king Mael Sechnaill and destroyed Dublin. The Viking age is considered to have ended with the establishment of Christianity as the dominant religion. So, the Irish fought the Vikings for almost 300 years.
    Merci beaucoup !

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    Modifié par heavydirtycat le 24-02-2017 16:32






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