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Message de lil2919 posté le 03-05-2017 à 17:56:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine et j'aurais voulu que vous me corrigiez mon travail.
Merci pour vos réponses.
To be able to answer my problem: What can be the advantages and the drawbacks when we leave his country?
At first I shall show the various advantages that there is when we leave his country with a podcast by Simon and in the second I shall show what are the drawbacks with Erasmus.
To leave its country of origin to go to study or to discover a new country is a unique experiment. According to Simon an expert of student travel, it is a fantastic experience which gives amazing opportunities for the future and to improve the daily lives of locals community projects, it’s really rewarding.
There are a student exchange programme as Erasmus, it allows students to study abroad, if there are a European citizen enrolled at a European university.
It allows of discover a new culture meet new people and make new friends, moreover it allows the students to live in another country, it’s the best way to learn a new on asset to find a job.
However, Erasmus has some drawbacks like not seeing his family and his friends for a longtime ,students can feel lonely or homesick to miss your family.
The experience is too expensive even with the grant, which can be a brake for this family, this can prevent a student from leaving.
Today it’s possible to leave his country to study in another. This unique experience makes it possible to study differently by discovering a new culture and a new life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2017 21:25
Message de lil2919 posté le 03-05-2017 à 17:56:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je passe mon oral d'anglais dans une semaine et j'aurais voulu que vous me corrigiez mon travail.
Merci pour vos réponses.
To be able to answer my problem: What can be the advantages and the drawbacks when we leave his country?
At first I shall show the various advantages that there is when we leave his country with a podcast by Simon and in the second I shall show what are the drawbacks with Erasmus.
To leave its country of origin to go to study or to discover a new country is a unique experiment. According to Simon an expert of student travel, it is a fantastic experience which gives amazing opportunities for the future and to improve the daily lives of locals community projects, it’s really rewarding.
There are a student exchange programme as Erasmus, it allows students to study abroad, if there are a European citizen enrolled at a European university.
It allows of discover a new culture meet new people and make new friends, moreover it allows the students to live in another country, it’s the best way to learn a new on asset to find a job.
However, Erasmus has some drawbacks like not seeing his family and his friends for a longtime ,students can feel lonely or homesick to miss your family.
The experience is too expensive even with the grant, which can be a brake for this family, this can prevent a student from leaving.
Today it’s possible to leave his country to study in another. This unique experience makes it possible to study differently by discovering a new culture and a new life.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2017 21:25
Réponse : Oral/Spaces and exchanges de laure95, postée le 04-05-2017 à 17:57:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
- my problem: the question
- What can be the advantages and the drawbacks when we leave his (pas le bon possessif)country?
At first I shall show the various advantages that there is (pluriel) when we leave his (voir plus haut)country with a podcast by Simon and in the (enlever in the)second I shall show what are the drawbacks (what the drawbacks are) with Erasmus.
- To leave its (pas le bon possessif) country of origin to go to (and pas to)study or to (pas de to) discover a new country
- is a unique experiment (pas le bon mot ici)
- locals (pas de s)community projects,
- There are a student exchange programme (there are + pluriel)as (pas le bon mot ici) Erasmus,
- there are a European citizen
- It allows of (pas la bonne préposition)discover a new culture
- to learn a new on asset: ?
students can feel lonely or homesick to miss your (pas le bon possessif)family.
Today it’s possible to leave his (pas le bon possessif) country to study in another
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